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I'll give you a little immersive recipe based on my research... an immersive narrative is one that cleverly hides the narrator's voice...

Okay you are right, i did use those tags a lot.

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So you are saying that words like asked,said need to be used less? eh you can't be worse than my parents, hit me.

Noted, I'll keep this in mind while writing the next chapter. Also, what did you feel while reading it.

It feels really weird for me, yeah. Huge paragraphs aren't great to look at either, you're right. I find that the best length is about...

Paragraphs are essentially an idea isolated in the text from other ideas. Each new paragraph essentially resets the short term thinking...

Is it immersion breaking? Because i am new at this and previously when i started reading i felt huge paragraphs were little tiring.

If you include that weird scene in your story, my parents will spank me. I'm just a fussy little girl. :blob_teary:

Slaneesh wants to know your location. *Happy degenerate noise* Oh i might include more than that... btw can you review my book if you...

Somebody mentioned Slaanesh?

I never thought of it. Now that you mention it, it does sound like that.

Glad you like those. Drew those myself, so if you need anything hand-drawn, you can commish me.

Definitely not smut. Its more like slaneesh kind of stuff.

Me too https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2019815/beast-heroes-biancas-genisis/...