Recent content by bumblebeelz

The original Nier OST is one of my go-tos.

Very cute. :blob_aww: Is the mark on the woman's neck a tattoo? Or is that a clever watermark?

Short answer, I've experienced it. No matter how you dress, there will always be people out there judging you. And some are going to be bold enough to comment on it. The long answer, I think the negative stuff comes from a place of wanting control over others. And when they don't have it, it...

A video titled "the Absolute Degeneracy of Modern Writing" already strikes a chord and makes me not want to give that video creator engagement. The thumbnail doesn't help either. All the books seem to be written by women. So, presumably, the creator's take is that novels written by women, for...

I poked into the other thread you made to give your excerpt a read, and I think it sounds fine. Nothing struck me as creepy. Answering the last question on sexy vs incel vibes, the first thing that comes to my mind is the use of "female" instead of "woman." As nouns, "male" and "female" sound...

Oh, I should have been more clear. I meant here on the forums. Trying to change your username from the main site doesn't work. Here's a direct link to the page I'm talking about: Account Details

Click your username in the top right, then "account details." There should be a "change" button next to your current handle. Changing it here on the forum will also change it on the main SH site.

Of all the games I can actually track the playtime for... I've got 522 hours in Conan Exiles.

I'm a basic bitch, so I like elves a lot.

Username: I've been using fallenbeelzebub as a handle for over a decade. It started from a seven deadly sins RP, where I played gluttony / Beelzebub. The owner talked me into changing my then username to match theirs and... I just stuck with it. At this point, I don't actually like it much, but...

I've tried the slow blink with my cat before, but it's never worked. He just stares at me, unimpressed. :blob_teary:

Name/Nickname: FallenBeelzebub, but I usually go by Beelz. Some people shorten it, so I get Beel and Bee thrown my way a lot too. Hobbies/Interests: Drawing: I mostly work as an illustrator through commission, so it's both my job and a major hobby. Reading: I read a couple books a month and...

Since I'm a sucker for stone-age settings, and enjoy danmei, I thought I'd give your first two chapters a read. You say you're a new writer and this is your first novel, so here are some tips for the future: You switch between present and past tense a few times throughout the chapters...

Native English speaker. I use them, although I try to be discerning in where I dump them; usually when dialogue or a thought has been interrupted. Or when I really want to emphasize a certain line. But mostly, I stick to commas or semi-colons.