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The goal was to rewrite the specific chapter that she linked in her original post. I'm pretty sure you just posted your own story. Are...

I can't tell what timezones are on this site, but hopefully I'm not too late because It's an interesting idea. The 600 word limit was...

Biggest thing I do is write where the jokes are supposed to go before hand, and just come back to work on them after I'm done with the...

I feel like I’ve pretty much read most of your story based on how much of it you’ve posted in the forums. I’ll say that this is your...

If I messed up anything in my feedback or misunderstood anything, feel free to let me know: 1. I've cried at gaming montages with sad...

I’ll start off by saying I’m pretty terrible at writing children characters myself, so I can give you more advice based on how I felt...

I'm okay with fragments usually, but I feel like you overused them a bit here. Like when you say The arena — the only place where his...