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You're fine, I appreciate the feedback and taking the time to go over it. I wrote the first chapter when I was very new to writing...

Bought my mom chocolate for Valentines, so I hope not.

I will tell you as someone who wrote over 120k words in screenplay format, mixed with book for my "theme," that readers really don't...

Sorry about it taking so long. Been trying to focus on my own writing, so I got a bit distracted: “Sage Cartwright broke her 2 month...

You gotta wait for a manual approval. It's just one dude sorting through it I believe, so just give it time.

If you asked any wn writers here on this forum what their first story was like, they would probably tell you it was crap. Tutorials are...

TLDR: Interesting take on an ethical question on how important agency is in romance. However, chapter 1’s execution relies on portraying...

That's a "Don't do what you did last time, please" statement lol. Since you don't want anything too in-depth, I'll just rapid fire this...

Honestly, the only connection I have to warhammer is from sending issues of white dwarf for close to a decade. To be honest, it’s hard...

I would like to announce the 100k views (58kRR + 45kSH) and 700+ readers mark within my 30 days of posting. Only adults allowed past...

Thanks for all the detailed feedback! This is exactly what I wanted in a review. Let me give some extra context on the creation of this...

You'll never be able to please everyone, but I'd say that's cause for celebration. That said, if you intend to reply, might I suggest...

I’ll keep this one short, because you’ve already got a great idea on where you’re going with this story. You've got an interesting...

I've written about 150k words total through a few accounts for my stories, and I've never got a single comment that wasn't from me...

Wow, this was amazing, thanks. I never liked dialogue tags in the beginning, but I've been using them more in current writing, so I'll...