Recent content by Bartun

I'm no romance writer, but for any romance to work, you have to make the reader invest emotionally in the characters. There's nothing more off-putting than a forced romance between characters you don't even care about. However, people will start 'shipping' any characters if they have good...

Hi guys! Chapter 20 of my novel Nowhere to Run has been completely rewritten! This one was hard! Cropped a lot but also added new scenes! It should read much better now! I'll leave the link below if you wish to take a look! https://www.scribblehub.com/read/283095-nowhere-to-run/chapter/1256371/

I don't mind it being used as a literary resource. There are plenty of stories out there that use it as a plot device to great effect, especially if it has lasting consequences to the story and it's not done just for the sake of incest. The best-known example is Game of Thrones, of course. For...

I did rewrite my entire story. I've learned a lot, and the contrast between my very first chapter and my last was like day and night. I'm quite proud of how it turned out, but I might rewrite it again in the future as I get better, and my earlier chapters show that.

My username? That's my real name. And my pic? That's a drawing of my character, Rudo, which is just a fictionalized version of myself. I actually look like this:

Hi guys! My story Nowhere to Run just reached 20K views! Thanks to everyone, even if you just clicked!

I don't want to be horny. I want to be happy. :cry:

Hi guys! Chapter 19 of my novel Nowhere to Run has been completely rewritten! Added and reckoned a bunch of stuff, and streamlined it all! It should read much better now! I'll leave the link below if you wish to take a look! https://www.scribblehub.com/read/283095-nowhere-to-run/chapter/1097805/

Just editing my goddamned book. I want it to be as good as possible!