Hi guys!
Chapter 17 of my novel Nowhere to Run has been completely rewritten! Added a few new scenes and streamlined it a bit. It reads much better now!
I'll leave the link below if you wish to take a look.
https://www.scribblehub.com/read/283095-nowhere-to-run/chapter/777635/
If you still feel like it, I'd love it if you check out my story Nowhere to Run. It's a fantasy-adventure survival story with a nobledark theme.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/283095/nowhere-to-run/
The cover looks great! I love the Carnotaurus, but couldn't help but notice the eyes. Blank eyes look cool when you want to give it a supernatural feel, but I think it would look much better if you gave the Carnotaurus BIRD predatory eyes.
Like this: