Recent content by AlphaMale

Honestly not sure myself what's considered a rough draft. I appreciate the call out on the initial hook though, still trying to figure out how to get the ball rolling a bit faster.

Randomly came up with this idea and wanted to see if it had any legs to stand on or not. Mostly want a baseline on how it feels before a more technical approach (though, I'm fine with any tips you feel like I could use). Did more screenplay writing compared to general prose, so I know I have a...