Need feedback for my rewrite

[Newbiereader123]

Hello. My novel name is Veteran reader in a regression novel. I just cane back from a 1 year hiatus and decided to rewrite my entire novel. I’m in need of feedback since the rewrite phase just started, I can make many modification

 

[Bimbanana]

Hello. My novel name is Veteran reader in a regression novel. I just cane back from a 1 year hiatus and decided to rewrite my entire novel. I’m in need of feedback since the rewrite phase just started, I can make many modification

Thou must weave a link within thy script for other souls to discover thee manuscript

 

[FRWriter]

Hello. My novel name is Veteran reader in a regression novel. I just cane back from a 1 year hiatus and decided to rewrite my entire novel. I’m in need of feedback since the rewrite phase just started, I can make many modification

First, you need to rewrite your request here ;)
Then you can take care of your novel.

 

[Newbiereader123]

First, you need to rewrite your request here ;)
Then you can take care of your novel.

Sure, I can do that. Honestly English isn’t my first languages so I will need many guidance. What would be your suggestion?

Thou must weave a link within thy script for other souls to discover thee manuscript

Errr honestly, idk how