The Last to Comment Wins

[ElijahRyne]

I am currently winning.

 

[Navillus]

Nyah!

 

[ElijahRyne]

I am winning currently.

 

[Worthy39]

I deny you your victory.

 

[AYM]

Winning.

 

[Anonjohn20]

Wah!

 

[Worthy39]

Are you Wah?

 

[Anonjohn20]

I am the pen holder.

 

[Navillus]

Nyah!

 

[Anonjohn20]

Nyah!

 

[Tempokai]

I'm winning currently by being late to work

 

[Anonjohn20]

I'm winning currently by being late to work

Are you paid by wage or by salary?

 

[Navillus]

Nyah!

 

[JayMark]

12 yo stealing 8 yo's coat and having freaky smelling sessions of that coat. It's framed as something nostalgic and good for that 12 yo by narrator, but that's just either disgusting or just freaky if you look from the far away in the land of common sense. I thought that only can happen in hentai with panties for comedy, I guess not.

A coat seems a lot tamer than panties though.

 

[Anonjohn20]

A coat seems a lot tamer than panties though.

The FBI is on their way to your house rn.

 

[Tempokai]

A coat seems a lot tamer than panties though.

But it was described in the same way as the pervert doing the same in 2000s manga but more graphically and over 10+ sentences for that, which elevated my disgust. I don't think I'll write anything about that webnovel as a roast anymore after a night of thinking lol

 

[Anonjohn20]

But it was described in the same way as the pervert doing the same in 2000s manga but more graphically and over 10+ sentences for that, which elevated my disgust. I don't think I'll write anything about that webnovel as a roast anymore after a night of thinking lol

What do you think would be more appropriate: Telling the author that you no longer want to roast his or her story after the disgusting part or not telling the author anything so he or she will wait forever for a roast that'll never appear?

 

[JayMark]

But it was described in the same way as the pervert doing the same in 2000s manga but more graphically and over 10+ sentences for that, which elevated my disgust. I don't think I'll write anything about that webnovel as a roast anymore after a night of thinking lol

Wow. That's a lot of work to describe coat sniffing. Do you think the author was inserting themselves into the MC?

 

[JayMark]

The FBI is on their way to your house rn.

Futa-lover pencil holder, I haven't wrote or read the scene. But it must be pretty bad if Tempo found it creepy.

 

[Tempokai]

Wow. That's a lot of work to describe coat sniffing. Do you think the author was inserting themselves into the MC?

Probably, yeah, given both are "autistsic", which I don't doubt, because this:

But wow, if that was the author experience in some sort of way, given the Wayne Booth's implied author theory, I don't trust that author about writing 12 yo's slice of life story at all. Sure, kids can be weird, but not weird at the step that it's borderline implied sexual in nature.

What do you think would be more appropriate: Telling the author that you no longer want to roast his or her story after the disgusting part or not telling the author anything so he or she will wait forever for a roast that'll never appear?

For this kind of author it's better to ignore and forget. The permission to roast was dropped almost 6 months ago, if he forgot about the roast, all the better. If not, it will be in a compilation roast where I'll compile all the webnovels that were dropped by the authors and mention it there briefly and that's it.

Also, I'm winning currently by writing this whole ass post instead of working