Cover for my story

[EdwinLovato]

Which Cover is better?

Spoiler: Option 1

Spoiler: Option 2

EDITED : I decided to draw the font manually.

 

[pangmida]

I adore the aura in the first one. I do think the typography (text) can have much more pizzazz to match your beautiful artwork.

 

[EdwinLovato]

I adore the aura in the first one. I do think the typography (text) can have much more pizzazz to match your beautiful artwork.

Yeah, I'm suck at typography, hahaha. I searched fonts for 3 hours but couldn't find anything suitable.

 

[blackcrowcrowd]

I like both, but I prefer the second. It felt like it have more 'soul' or something. Anw, both are pretty cool so

 

[EdwinLovato]

I like both, but I prefer the second. It felt like it have more 'soul' or something. Anw, both are pretty cool so

Maybe because she was dancing and killing? hahaha

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

2nd... the first looks like a weirdly focused camera... almost like using a fisheye for a portrait shot.

Edit - I will say I like the idea of her sitting on top of her kill here more than the other one... just not the extended leg thing.

 

[EdwinLovato]

2nd... the first looks like a weirdly focused camera... almost like using a fisheye for a portrait shot.

Edit - I will say I like the idea of her sitting on top of her kill here more than the other one... just not the extended leg thing.

hahaha yeah it's like fisheye thingy, I like drawing using perspectives.

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

hahaha yeah it's like fisheye thingy, I like drawing using perspectives.

valid concept then.

I think it would be hilarious if she was even more non chalant about it, like drinkinga juice box or something...

Something like this, cept obviously not sexualized like this pic, just like f- it im tired, ill chill here for a bit

 

[EdwinLovato]

valid concept then.

I think it would be hilarious if she was even more non chalant about it, like drinkinga juice box or something...


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Something like this, cept obviously not sexualized like this pic, just like f- it im tired, ill chill here for a bit

I did try to draw with this kind of pose actually. But let me be honest, i'm still struggling draw woman figure haha

That's why Janett looks like a man.

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

I did try to draw with this kind of pose actually. But let me be honest, i'm still struggling draw woman figure haha

That's why Janett looks like a man.

really... I thought she was well done... I figured you just weren't going for the super beautiful image, but more of a regular human being.

 

[EdwinLovato]

really... I thought she was well done... I figured you just weren't going for the super beautiful image, but more of a regular human being.

I just tried draw a pose, but still hard to draw the face, haha

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

I just tried draw a pose, but still hard to draw the face, haha

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hehe still way better than I can do... if you use her bangs to hide parts of her face, you can probably get away with murder lol

 

[ZannaYO]

I like the first one because of how dynamic the angle is, more visually interesting to me. I agree the typography could be better though
Edit: didn’t realise you'd fixed it already!! Looks great

 

[EdwinLovato]

hehe still way better than I can do... if you use her bangs to hide parts of her face, you can probably get away with murder lol

Still, need to drill more.

I like the first one because of how dynamic the angle is, more visually interesting to me. I agree the typography could be better though
Edit: didn’t realise you'd fixed it already!! Looks great

Thank you, i think I'll use the first cover, since the vote at option 1 higher.

 

[Lmae]

The 2nd cover.

 

[EdwinLovato]

Thank you for the responses, I decided to use the first Option as my story cover.