Ai-chan is ruined!

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You know, Ai-chan wanted to join a contest but with all the commitments, there is no time to write with full attention. So Ai-chan was thinking of writing the story in a light novel format at least just to get the plot written out, like how Ai-chan used to write back in the day.

But then, just as Ai-chan wrote the first line, Ai-chan came to the question: How... how to write light novel again?

Ai-chan got absolutely baffled. Instead of quick-to-write chapters, Ai-chan couldn't help but put lengthy descriptions. Yes, by now you've probably asked the question, "Then why not just not write the descriptions in detail?"

But that's the thing! Even if Ai-chan consciously chosen to not write detailed description, the composition felt incomplete. How? How did Ai-chan write light novels before? How did Ai-chan write light novels while still letting people understand the story in the past?

Ai-chan can no longer write light novels! Curse you OCD!
 
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Ai-chan said:
You know, Ai-chan wanted to join a contest but with all the commitments, there is no time to write with full attention. So Ai-chan was thinking of writing the story in a light novel format at least just to get the plot written out, like how Ai-chan used to write back in the day.

But then, just as Ai-chan wrote the first line, Ai-chan came to the question: How... how to write light novel again?

Ai-chan got absolutely baffled. Instead of quick-to-write chapters, Ai-chan couldn't help but put lengthy descriptions. Yes, by now you've probably asked the question, "Then why not just not write the descriptions in detail?"

But that's the thing! Even if Ai-chan consciously chosen to not write detailed description, the composition felt incomplete. How? How did Ai-chan write light novels before? How did Ai-chan write light novels while still letting people understand the story in the past?

Ai-chan can no longer write light novels! Curse you OCD!
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I chacked out of curiosity, this is not light novel... this is P*rn. (insert scared cat with boots in here)
 
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Ai-chan said:
You know, Ai-chan wanted to join a contest but with all the commitments, there is no time to write with full attention. So Ai-chan was thinking of writing the story in a light novel format at least just to get the plot written out, like how Ai-chan used to write back in the day.

But then, just as Ai-chan wrote the first line, Ai-chan came to the question: How... how to write light novel again?

Ai-chan got absolutely baffled. Instead of quick-to-write chapters, Ai-chan couldn't help but put lengthy descriptions. Yes, by now you've probably asked the question, "Then why not just not write the descriptions in detail?"

But that's the thing! Even if Ai-chan consciously chosen to not write detailed description, the composition felt incomplete. How? How did Ai-chan write light novels before? How did Ai-chan write light novels while still letting people understand the story in the past?

Ai-chan can no longer write light novels! Curse you OCD!
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Have an energy drink and a candy bar right before you start writing. Next, pretend you are leaving this plane of existence, ?, Success?
 
CarburetorThompson

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Ai-chan said:
You know, Ai-chan wanted to join a contest but with all the commitments, there is no time to write with full attention. So Ai-chan was thinking of writing the story in a light novel format at least just to get the plot written out, like how Ai-chan used to write back in the day.

But then, just as Ai-chan wrote the first line, Ai-chan came to the question: How... how to write light novel again?

Ai-chan got absolutely baffled. Instead of quick-to-write chapters, Ai-chan couldn't help but put lengthy descriptions. Yes, by now you've probably asked the question, "Then why not just not write the descriptions in detail?"

But that's the thing! Even if Ai-chan consciously chosen to not write detailed description, the composition felt incomplete. How? How did Ai-chan write light novels before? How did Ai-chan write light novels while still letting people understand the story in the past?

Ai-chan can no longer write light novels! Curse you OCD!
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Don’t worry Ai-Chan. If you want to write a light novel you can just work backwards. All you need to do is write a normal novel, and then delete all of the prose that describes the detailed environment, and any in depth description of character emotion. Easy.
 
JayMark

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Just read over your lengthy description and erase anything repetitive, contradictory, or wordy without conveying new meaning. I lose eighty percent of my descriptive text on the rewrite.
 
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