I am immortal in the world of cultivation

[True_Myriad_Monarch]

This is a novel who's review i read and it intriged me, so i read it all when finding someplace to read it in english i found that there was just one translation and it was just 5 chapter in webnovel , after reading it i wanted to translate it to make it readable in english.this is my first translation so please tell me all of my mistake so i can do better, this is the link 'I am immortal in the world of cultivation' the original
Mine is this

 

[Puji-Maki]

Why not. Go for it. Heck, you can make a Patreon if you want.

 

[True_Myriad_Monarch]

Why not. Go for it. Heck, you can make a Patreon if you want.

Nah It's better if everyone can read it I don't want to add a paywall

 

[Puji-Maki]

Nah It's better if everyone can read it I don't want to add a paywall

That's great then.

 

[CharlesEBrown]

This is a novel who's review i read and it intriged me, so i read it all when finding someplace to read it in english i found that there was just one translation and it was just 5 chapter in webnovel , after reading it i wanted to translate it to make it readable in english.this is my first translation so please tell me all of my mistake so i can do better, this is the link 'I am immortal in the world of cultivation' the original
Mine is this

If you can, I would suggest contacting the author or copyright holder (publisher, or whatnot) and try to get permission first.

 

[True_Myriad_Monarch]

If you can, I would suggest contacting the author or copyright holder (publisher, or whatnot) and try to get permission first.

i want to but i dont know how to contact him/her

 

[CharlesEBrown]

i want to but i dont know how to contact him/her

The page translation lists the author as "Heaven and Moon" ... but the site is confusing because half the time it does not offer autotranslation and the other half it wants you to log in to do anything. Can't find an author profile or a feedback area. Hmm - you sure this site isn't a harvester?
It is also on NovelUpdates listing two authors.

Doesn't help that there are two other webnovels with very different synopses and very similar titles up there (and both written by someone who's name translates as either: Woodworking Mi Qing or Carpenter Rice Green but that features Zhou Yi and not Su Yuan - and the subtly different title is I Am Immortal In The Cultivation World)

 

[True_Myriad_Monarch]

The page translation lists the author as "Heaven and Moon" ... but the site is confusing because half the time it does not offer autotranslation and the other half it wants you to log in to do anything. Can't find an author profile or a feedback area. Hmm - you sure this site isn't a harvester?
It is also on NovelUpdates listing two authors.

Doesn't help that there are two other webnovels with very different synopses and very similar titles up there (and both written by someone who's name translates as either: Woodworking Mi Qing or Carpenter Rice Green but that features Zhou Yi and not Su Yuan - and the subtly different title is I Am Immortal In The Cultivation World)

I just found another novel by the same author here in scribblehub, i have sent him a message to help me get in contact with the original author as he may also have gotten permission.

The page translation lists the author as "Heaven and Moon" ... but the site is confusing because half the time it does not offer autotranslation and the other half it wants you to log in to do anything. Can't find an author profile or a feedback area. Hmm - you sure this site isn't a harvester?
It is also on NovelUpdates listing two authors.

Doesn't help that there are two other webnovels with very different synopses and very similar titles up there (and both written by someone who's name translates as either: Woodworking Mi Qing or Carpenter Rice Green but that features Zhou Yi and not Su Yuan - and the subtly different title is I Am Immortal In The Cultivation World)

I Am Immortal In The Cultivation World is another different novel, there is just one translation of the novel i am translating and it is this with only 5 chapters in webnovel