Post your characters, and I’ll tell you what I think about them [Smash or Pass Edition]

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This is Sybil, or the adult form of her while she's doing her mercenary work.
After getting separated from her mother she works her way up to a baron after some shenaniganery and hard work.
She's got a very active internal monologue but is generally not talkative, hates birds and rivers, and loves the taste of seafood
If you want a quiet and loyal companion she just might be the one for you
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This is Sybil, or the adult form of her while she's doing her mercenary work.
After getting separated from her mother she works her way up to a baron after some shenaniganery and hard work.
She's got a very active internal monologue but is generally not talkative, hates birds and rivers, and loves the taste of seafood
If you want a quiet and loyal companion she just might be the one for you
Pass. Boobs not big enough.
 

georgelee5786

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Elysif Avian
Age: 22
Tomboyish personality with a love for medical studies. Radical feminist by 1880s standard but heavily red-pilled by modern standards. She is like a cat around the people she likes, shy but absolutely willing to join in conversation if it interests her and/or she wants attention. Does not know what to do around children. She refines opium and sells it as a side job and is highly respected amongst the underground.

Hobbies include modifying clothing, potion/medicine making, ingesting Opium, dissecting/stitching people, rummy, reading, and gardening.

Hates wasps, the cold, her mother, and nunnery nurses.

Favorite food is venison stew with cheese-covered garlic bread.
Deadass looked at this and thought 'female Paul?'
 

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Deadass looked at this and thought 'female Paul?'
Just want to say, no. That is, unless you subscribe to the theory that all book characters are splinters of the authors soul, then still no, but a less resistant no.
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Sela
Age: Time, literally as old as time because they are time.
Can take the form of whatever you view time as in your subconscious. Dictates the passing of time under the guide of Fate, another entity. Loves tampering with the universe for shits and giggles but wants surprises so Sela selects random humans and grants them time powers to fuck around and find out with.

Hobbies include Lazing around, playing different games that have been invented throughout history, Watching new timestream/choices get made, and testing human's physical, emotional, mental, and spiritual strength.

Hates Bean bag chairs, shoes, and Rags(Fate)

Favorite food is Manna, drenched in honey and paired with wine
 
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Just want to say, no. That is, unless you subscribe to the theory that all book characters are splinters of the authors soul, then still no, but a less resistant no.
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Sela
Age: Time, literally as old as time because they are time.
Can take the form of whatever you view time as in your subconscious. Dictates the passing of time under the guide of Fate, another entity. Loves tampering with the universe for shits and giggles but wants surprises so Sela selects random humans and grants them time powers to fuck around and find out with.

Hobbies include Lazing around, playing different games that have been invented throughout history, Watching new timestream/choices get made, and testing human's physical, emotional, mental, and spiritual strength.

Hates Bean bag chairs, shoes, and Rags(Fate)

Favorite food is Manna, drenched in honey and paired with wine
its close but I’m leaning towards pass
 

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Had fun reading SallyG’s thread. So I straight yoinked it and thought doing this would be funny

Rules are mostly the same (I stole them) except #4 it’s a yes or no question, so I feel anyone can answer. Also added 5

1. You post one character at a time. If you want to post one more, wait for another forum user to ask, or at least wait for my reply.

2. You describe how your character looks. You can use an image, you can write it, or use both methods.

3. You describe the personality of your character. You can also add hobbies, favorite food, whatever you want or need to mention. Preferably, make it 5-7 sentences long. Don't be afraid to write spoilers via spoiler button. I need to know why the character is like that to make an opinion. Moreover, chances are high that I won't read your story. So don't be afraid to spoil it for me.

4. Wait for anyone to reply with an answer.

5. Smash or Pass doesn’t need to be explicitly sexual. Remember to keep forum rules in mind when posting.
MC is a blank slate, one that is slightly unique but not really. Only through his environment does he become unique, he is broken down to be carved into a person who has unhealthy obsessions. Most of these obsessions are about the people around him, they are the only people he has and due to him not ever having a home, they are all they he had.

These obsessions lead to him going down a dark path, leading to him losing everything. He loses his mind and becomes a semi-insane psychopath whose only goal is to escape the influence of his environment and mind through extreme measures. This leads to developments in his mind, causing it to splinter into two.

His identity becomes muddled, and he faces the reality that what he's doing is destroying him, he has to decide what he will become and do. Also, he likes doing experiments, and is also extremely curious, to the point he would easily put his life on the line.

The pictures are kind of like a beginning, middle, and result. (How he changed due to his inanity as you will.)
 

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MC is a blank slate, one that is slightly unique but not really. Only through his environment does he become unique, he is broken down to be carved into a person who has unhealthy obsessions. Most of these obsessions are about the people around him, they are the only people he has and due to him not ever having a home, they are all they he had.

These obsessions lead to him going down a dark path, leading to him losing everything. He loses his mind and becomes a semi-insane psychopath whose only goal is to escape the influence of his environment and mind through extreme measures. This leads to developments in his mind, causing it to splinter into two.

His identity becomes muddled, and he faces the reality that what he's doing is destroying him, he has to decide what he will become and do. Also, he likes doing experiments, and is also extremely curious, to the point he would easily put his life on the line.

The pictures are kind of like a beginning, middle, and result. (How he changed due to his inanity as you will.)
Pass. Not into BL.
 

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MC is a blank slate, one that is slightly unique but not really. Only through his environment does he become unique, he is broken down to be carved into a person who has unhealthy obsessions. Most of these obsessions are about the people around him, they are the only people he has and due to him not ever having a home, they are all they he had.

These obsessions lead to him going down a dark path, leading to him losing everything. He loses his mind and becomes a semi-insane psychopath whose only goal is to escape the influence of his environment and mind through extreme measures. This leads to developments in his mind, causing it to splinter into two.

His identity becomes muddled, and he faces the reality that what he's doing is destroying him, he has to decide what he will become and do. Also, he likes doing experiments, and is also extremely curious, to the point he would easily put his life on the line.

The pictures are kind of like a beginning, middle, and result. (How he changed due to his inanity as you will.)

Pass first picture is cute, but too crazy 4 me
 

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She's my MC Nina. She's the protagonist of my novel Nowhere to Run.

Nina is a 13-year-old apprentice priestess (13 is considered of age in her world). She's intelligent and well-read but also naive, good-natured, polite, and a bit arrogant, and self-righteous, having strong preconceived notions about chivalry and morality.

She loves reading (especially forbidden literature) and made a habit of overhearing conversations. Although she started her journey in her home country, she has difficulty interacting with people having been raised and educated in a distant realm under a different culture.

But her world turns upside down when the town she's currently visiting is attacked by barbarian raiders, and she must escape. She soon discovers she's in the middle of a conspiracy of massive proportions, being targetted not only by the barbarians but also by bounty hunters. She has no powers and is just as strong as any normal teenager, so she must resort to her wits to evade capture, make allies, reach a safe haven, and uncover the mystery behind the conspiracy while navigating through unknown and hostile lands.

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She's my MC Nina. She's the protagonist of my novel Nowhere to Run.

Nina is a 13-year-old apprentice priestess (13 is considered of age in her world). She's intelligent and well-read but also naive, good-natured, polite, and a bit arrogant, and self-righteous, having strong preconceived notions about chivalry and morality.

She loves reading (especially forbidden literature) and made a habit of overhearing conversations. Although she started her journey in her home country, she has difficulty interacting with people having been raised and educated in a distant realm under a different culture.

But her world turns upside down when the town she's currently visiting is attacked by barbarian raiders, and she must escape. She soon discovers she's in the middle of a conspiracy of massive proportions, being targetted not only by the barbarians but also by bounty hunters. She has no powers and is just as strong as any normal teenager, so she must resort to her wits to evade capture, make allies, reach a safe haven, and uncover the mystery behind the conspiracy while navigating through unknown and hostile lands.

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Pass. I don’t care if 13 is of age in that world, the FBI monitors our internet activity.
 

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Her name is Rajan Kabir The Final Showdown, Eldritch God of the star Merope.

Personality: a true pascifist, cute and funny.
hobby: documenting the history of the universe
Like: a good sandwich, singing, hosting shows across the universe (usually concerts and talk shows)
Dislike: None (she will always accept you as who you are)

This is her human disguise, her true form is a pinkish white bunny with ten eyes and eight ears.
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Her name is Rajan Kabir The Final Showdown, Eldritch God of the star Merope.

Personality: a true pascifist, cute and funny.
hobby: documenting the history of the universe
Like: a good sandwich, singing, hosting shows across the universe (usually concerts and talk shows)
Dislike: None (she will always accept you as who you are)

This is her human disguise, her true form is a pinkish white bunny with ten eyes and eight ears.
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Her name is Rajan Kabir The Final Showdown, Eldritch God of the star Merope.

Personality: a true pascifist, cute and funny.
hobby: documenting the history of the universe
Like: a good sandwich, singing, hosting shows across the universe (usually concerts and talk shows)
Dislike: None (she will always accept you as who you are)

This is her human disguise, her true form is a pinkish white bunny with ten eyes and eight ears.
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Pass. I have a grudge against the person who wrote her.
 
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