Anyone want to read my Fly story?

[Lysander_Works]

Think of it like a short break from the bigger books. I came up with this while messing around myself.

Life of the Fruitfly

A short tale about the man who went too far to rid his home of one pest; the fly is a fly, not worth such a big mess.

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Think of it like a short break from the bigger books. I came up with this while messing around myself.

Life of the Fruitfly

A short tale about the man who went too far to rid his home of one pest; the fly is a fly, not worth such a big mess.

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The story is really fun, and it's a nice lesson. Also love the poetic aspect of it! You should submit in my poem thread~

Writing Prompt - Envy's Poem Thread

(I said I wouldn't make another poem thread, but this idea entered my head. Write a four verse or longer poem. They can be about anything. That is all. Haikus are acceptable as well.) Enter and let it free. Come and sing your poetry. Enter into my thread. Come and unleash your lead. Don’t...

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Very well done! The only part that is a little weak for me is the ending paragraphs. Besides that I would give this 5 ????? for personal enjoyment!

 

[Lysander_Works]

The story is really fun, and it's a nice lesson. Also love the poetic aspect of it! You should submit in my poem thread~

Writing Prompt - Envy's Poem Thread

(I said I wouldn't make another poem thread, but this idea entered my head. Write a four verse or longer poem. They can be about anything. That is all. Haikus are acceptable as well.) Enter and let it free. Come and sing your poetry. Enter into my thread. Come and unleash your lead. Don’t...

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Very well done! The only part that is a little weak for me is the ending paragraphs. Besides that I would give this 5 ????? for personal enjoyment!

Thank you. It was fun to make.