My Entire Class Was Summoned to Another World except for Me

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Character name is Madoka Chizuru/Matsumoto Chihiro, a.k.a MC [choose your gender please].

MC was in a [DIY-Name-Yourself] Highschool in a [Random] town in Japanese.

In the past, MC is been good friends with some neighbourhood kids since they met in park. MC has good friends with uniquely strong childhood bond between boys and girls due to close neighborhood and being classmates.

They talk together, camp together, having tour to lakes, mountain, and beach together. Sharing lots of adventures and childhood memories.

All of them coincidentally lives in neighborhood where kindergarten, Elementary school, Middle School, and High school were open in very close areas. They're from the same private company.

No need for riding trains, bus, or even bike. Just walk to school and walk home easy. It's not like it's actually a bad schools, albeit not the best in town. It's perfect area for children and parents, practical heaven.

At elementary school, One kid realized this and tells every in the group. Those kids were convinced by this kid to be together until high school graduation.

MC and friends swore to stay together until graduation day. And they will never be apart. As usual, naive kids antics.

but stupid parent suddenly wake up the wrong way and said "we need to move to another country/town/province".

MC forced to move with sudden goodbye from elementary school. MC didn't know how to say it properly, as MC is just a very confused kid that scared they will blame and hate MC because they may thought MC betray them.

MC arrive and became awkward in new school since parent choose to move recklessly. MC develop insecurities and miss old friends. MC having hard time and only wish to be back with old friends.

But after MC, parent finally snap out of it and gone back to their old neighborhood after elementary school/middle school.

It's very awkward for MC to meet up with old friends in school, and MC felt happy, angry, guilt, shame, sad, shyness, and other mix up of old feelings.

Childhood friends still together due to their parents were close and they interact everyday. They also make good connection to study and make sure to help each other whenever they need help. It's all due to the effort of One smart kid and one parent that inspire them all to make such unique connection. One thing MC didn't knew, Those kid already knew why MC left them from their parent.

MC always want to be with them again, but didn't know how to express. The others also know MC's predicament, but they misunderstood MC reactions. MC realizing that MC was having crush with one of the childhood friend didn't help either.

It took quite some time of misunderstanding and awkward interactions. MC slowly talk with other classmates and the ones that has been good to MC. After confrontation, MC finally cries and saying that MC is sorry for leaving them.

Dramatic confession and apology ensues. MC remember that MC is the one who came up with the idea of staying together until graduation. MC is the one who pioneered the effort of studying together so that they can play longer, a unique studying mindset habits that help them became top class for years.

MC mind froze up when the parent told MC to pack things and say goodbye to friend. MC having breakdown when being angry saying fricken up goodbye back then. MC feel guilty for betraying them after all MC has said and done to them.

MC was having trouble living in new place since MC is still guilty with old friend and can't forget them, while trying it's best to study and get score so that MF may be able to be back again.

the childhood group feel sorry about MC's predicament. And they console MC as with experience they're no longer naive children. MC keep blabbering everything depressing and sad until MC Accidentally confess having crush with one of them but too guilty to approach.

MC is about to be beet red and depressed again until one of them pat MC in the back and said consoling words to calm MC, while the one in crush still confused due to how expected yet unexpected statement.

MC finally back in the gang. MC has been interacting with the classmates like proper student with the childhood friends help. He/She made friends with some of them while avoiding the other while hearing gossip about boyband/girlband group and also recent gossip about school plan of study tour in a mountain.

The mountain is the one that the childhood friend has been gone together. It's the same mountain that they finally swore to stay together. All of them were excited, albeit MC still A bit guilty and sad.

They ride the bus to the mountains with the class. and while talking together, MC and childhood group remembered about the roads and how it changes.

After the tiring ceremony, mountain climb, rest, climbing again, the tent building, taking bath, and ceremony at night, they gather near fire while reminiscing their childhood memories.

MC wakes up in the morning and start doing group hike to another tourism place in the mountain. in the middle of tiring walks, MC look at the spot and start to talk about one of them pissing their pants when there's no toilet and other childhood stories. There's still no toilet there either, but it seems the destination is even more invested with vending machine than ever.

They look at the scenery and sit together at the spot they used to sit years ago. They remembered that time when MC actually bring up the fact that those school were near each other back then, and MC sounds like genius in those eyes of those naive kids.

Now looking back, they realize how easy it is to gain students grades if they're helping each other. Even if they joke about math, they're still top of the class. One lf them is angry and ask to not reminds them of school at this blessed study tour. They laugh at other jokes.

The group follows another hike down and back to their camp while doing outbound activities and having great time. After bath and night ceremony, they burn marshmallow at the fire. All of them bring their own marshmallow since they remembered the past where they didn't bring enough marshmallow, and it became a blast of marshmallow party for them.

MC and The one MC have crush with choose to talk privately. The moon is beautiful and the stars is pretty. But none of them ask one to be boyfriend/girlfriend since it's too awkward yet.

But they do really talks a lot like two couple in already deep in relationships, sharing their opinion about romance and future plandms while also sharing dirty secret and dark history they manage to collect all this time.

The morning came and they reluctantly put down their tent and finishing Closing ceremony with the whole school group. And then the climb down and bus going home.

MC and one of the person in group that have same gender with MC talks to each other. They talks about MC future plan and how it goes with MC's crush. They're surprisingly open about it since they're all just too connected since childhood, as unbelievable as it is for others.

MC is listening and occasionally talks to interrupt MC's friend, while suddenly seeing unstable truck near them and Hit the bus while breaking the railings and down into the cliff.

Everyone scream and suddenly it's dark and silent.























MC wakes up and shocked.

It's an unfamiliar ceilings.

What the heck happened.

There's a Infusion needle in MC's hand

Stench of medical alcohol, hand sanitizer, with Oxygen tube in nose.


Apparently MC is the only one who miraculously survived from the bus crash.

The MC is being told that the friend near MC tries to protect MC and became the meat shield apparently.

MC also remembered when the friend screamed MC's name and hug MC before it all went down.

I've been struggling all this time just to meet them again.

Why they're leaving me alone again ??

MC mind having breakdown of suddenly having the entire class died on the crash.

MC is slowly being filled with collections of negative emotions that were familiar and the ones that weren't familiar.

The world feels like raining again.

There's lots of news and stories everywhere, complete with sensation and stuff front the school.

But it's just hard to cope if there's too much distraction.











MC didn't know how to cope anymore.

MC resort to lots of stories.

After months of degeneracy, MC find one story that relate to MC

Apparently there's lots of stories of a whole class died and reincarnated to another world.

MC cries while seeing the whole story unfolds and reimagining how would MC's class would be if they're transported to another world.

"It seems that my entire class was summoned to another world except for me"









Why do you all leave me alone ?




I want to go adventure with you all !!










MC stop reading and walks in the night at the empty roads.

There's redlight up ahead.

It's light shine beautifully in the middle of dark closed shops and white streetlights.

There's a truck speeding coming from far away.

The zebra crossing is signaling a red light for pedestrian.

The MC continue to walk












Choose action :

1. Walk back to home








2. Stop at the red light pole







3. Continue to walk to the Zebra Cross

[Choose your action]
 

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3.

Of course he has to choose 3. How else will he get summoned then? Blinking outside of a convenient store? Heh
 

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Moving recklessly isn't a thing for healthy adults. If the parents are moving recklessly, there must be other, more serious issues at play.

Healthy adults explain to the child that Mommy earns more money than Daddy, and the new manager at Mommy's work feels threatened by competent women, so Mommy got laid off and needs to find a new job. A week later, Mommy says she has two job interviews and needs to fly to those states (because the internet isn't fast enough for Youtube yet, let alone fast enough for live video chats). A week after that, Mommy says she got both jobs and asks the rest of the family which state they want to live in.
 

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Jokingly?
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Realistically? I'd try and find myself a psychologist, that image of that day won't go away that easily...

Me?
1. Walk back to home
Ain't no one's watching out for you in this cruel world, hombre.
Don't get mugged on the way home!
 

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3.

Of course he has to choose 3. How else will he get summoned then? Blinking outside of a convenient store? Heh
Obviously someone will intervene to save his life at the cost of their own, causing them to be isekai'd and the MC to get locked up in an asylum and put on suicide watch.
 

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Thanks all for reading.

It's started since I read the JP LN title named "My Entire Class Was Summoned to Another World except for Me" on Novel Updates.

But the cliched premise make me cringe and I tried to think of different kind of story it may deserve in my opinion.

My original plan was to ask for critique and writing prompt from these before making it into a proper one shot.

But I'm simply too lazy to write actual plot and dialogue. I didn't really know how to write character interaction, so I can only lay down the plot as rough draft/outline.

Probably it's slightly better than the actual premise of the original story the title came from. But it's just a rough outline, so it still lose after all. But as long it's no longer cringy happy go lucky harem OP highschool story, it's okay for me.

Realistically? I'd try and find myself a psychologist, that image of that day won't go away that easily...

Me?

Ain't no one's watching out for you in this cruel world, hombre.
Don't get mugged on the way home!
Yep. MC parent is rich, expensive phycologist must be easy to get.

The image of that day will go away, but it will be replaced with delusional fake memory made of guilt that make things look worse than it should.

By the way, there's no mugging in Japan, it's very safe over there. You can trust your kindergarten kid to ride bus & train safely.

Moving recklessly isn't a thing for healthy adults. If the parents are moving recklessly, there must be other, more serious issues at play.

Healthy adults...
Nah, don't expect much healthy adults from Asian. Even if it's japanese.

it's similar situation with "Inside Out", parent simply move due to unexplained business recklessness and it affects their kid.

The difference is MC parents lucky enough to do turnaround and successfully gain their old home back.



Obviously someone will intervene to save his life at the cost of their own, causing them to be isekai'd and the MC to get locked up in an asylum and put on suicide watch.
If that what you wished for :

it's an empty street at night,
the truck is minding his own delivery business at night,
It's green light for the truck and Red light for the walkers,
Suddenly, there's a kid walking down the road,
The truck driver slam the brakes and spun the steering wheel,
The truck avoid the passerby at the cost of driver life,

Surprise surprise,
The truck driver Ossan is the one who saves MC's life at the cost of his own.
 
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