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Wallflower
BL SMUT REVIEW + (DARK SMUTTY NOVELS) let's review each other~
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Beta_Krogoth
Lysander_Works
One-time Revision Swap [CLOSED]
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Lysander_Works
Sylver
How do you feel about character-driven stories compared to plot-driven stories?
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TsumiHokiro
YusakuRay
first chapter review
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3
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460
YusakuRay
YusakuRay
theenngee
Review swap: 15k words (2 slots open)
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0
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180
theenngee
theenngee
M.G.Driver
Free First Impressions Feedback Thread
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Chaperone
Chaperone
CreationWillL
Prologue
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So_Indecisive
How can you limit a speedsters power while making it still interesting.
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prognastat
prognastat
CreationWillL
Looking for a 2nd opinion
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12
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CreationWillL
DearDire
feedback or critiscm
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5
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Glitched
Glitched
Glitched
Review Swap (3/3)
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3
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597
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DearDire
moon47
I was a RACIST troll so i was reborn as a SLAVE (iseaki)
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11
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728
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moon47
SpringInWinter
can you give a feedback to my story??
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0
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140
SpringInWinter
SpringInWinter
Beta_Krogoth
Unoriginal feedback request thread #575389 - BUT THIS TIME WITH SEX
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0
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231
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Beta_Krogoth
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Incest smut (brother+sister). Yeah, I'm at it again '-'
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15
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AnonUnlimited
Prince_Azmiran_Myrian
[Closed] Free Feedback from the Prince
6 7 8
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144
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TsumiHokiro
TheTrinary
Looking for Things to Review
9 10 11
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204
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P.R.S
Any feedback or criticism
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6
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673
P.R.S
P.R.S
FrankieCheng
Review swap (5/5) first 5 chapters [closed]
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11
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973
FrankieCheng
FrankieCheng
LeeroyCGNA
Major League System - Feedback
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0
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