Story Feedback

Selfmaiden
BL novel (mature) --- I would love some feedback!
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0
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127
Selfmaiden
Selfmaiden
John_Owl
Feedback on a short 4 chapter set in my one-shots?
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0
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147
John_Owl
John_Owl
ElijahRyne
Rough draft of first chapter. Thoughts, suggestions, and can you figure out the mystery.
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6
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472
ElijahRyne
ElijahRyne
PuffyPencil
Hello! May I have some feedback?
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4
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289
PBJ_Time
PBJ_Time
G
Anybody want to share feedback?
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9
Views
713
PuffyPencil
PuffyPencil
SallyAdomelieu
Feedback for 1 or both stories so far
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0
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118
SallyAdomelieu
SallyAdomelieu
Y
(Isekai - Demons) Please give me a story feedback!! 10k words rn, I want a feedback on what I'm missing.
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0
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150
YShiNovels
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Feedback?
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1
Views
241
BLIGHT_ZERO
BLIGHT_ZERO
PBJ_Time
Requesting feedback on my 4 chapters
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0
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222
PBJ_Time
PBJ_Time
SirDogeTheFirst
First chapter feedback
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0
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147
SirDogeTheFirst
SirDogeTheFirst
John_Owl
Furry isekai harem (No smut... yet)
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6
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1K
John_Owl
John_Owl
EdoKant
Is anyone interested in a review or rating swap?
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19
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1K
EdoKant
EdoKant
PBJ_Time
Chapter 2 is out!
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0
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233
PBJ_Time
PBJ_Time
PBJ_Time
First Chapter Impressions Swap?
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5
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461
JayMark
JayMark
PBJ_Time
Okay, let's do a first chapter review swap
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4
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310
Little-Moon
Little-Moon
SabrielSilver
Help Desired - Do My First Chapters Draw You In?
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4
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608
BLIGHT_ZERO
BLIGHT_ZERO
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9
Views
630
Tempokai
Tempokai
Mugong
Could I get some feedback on my first chapter?
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12
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1K
Mugong
Mugong
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Delete my account
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19
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2K
beast_regards
beast_regards
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0
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137
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