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audrey_xo_
☆ the final chapters of my yuri & shōjo light novel & art magazine “Lily & Rose Issue #1” r out now \(｡• ̫ •｡)/
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audrey_xo_
audrey_xo_
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My first story. Any feedback is welcome!!
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Aug_N7052
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OatMush
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I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.
8 9 10
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wordsmith12008
This junior seeks a punishment for his terrible wordsmithing!
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548
wordsmith12008
wordsmith12008
Hoshino
Honest Feedback pls.(Not valid)
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4
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525
Hoshino
Hoshino
Daydreamers
Feedback
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3
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288
CharlesEBrown
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RoyalTime
Help me a bit guys?
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6
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390
RedMuffin
RedMuffin
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I need honest feedback
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7
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639
Alski
Alski
Azamukul
Am I doing anything wrong?
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4
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435
Azamukul
Azamukul
deweyan
Just published my Tomboy Harem novel publically
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7
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869
deweyan
deweyan
R
I need opinions about my pacing.
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1
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205
Tempokai
Tempokai
sabit_hasan
Looking for Feedback on My Ongoing Novel "Waves of War"
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3
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346
Tempokai
Tempokai
BlacknWhite
New Writer Here
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6
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530
BlacknWhite
BlacknWhite
Scaletalon
Thoughts on synopsis
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1
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245
sbdrag
sbdrag
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New writer, need feedback.
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5
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588
Neemsay
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HarperMcFarlane
Requesting Feedback on a Fantasy Adventure story. Review for Review!
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2
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353
sbdrag
sbdrag
abi.p
Chapter 1 of sapphic fantasy book
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2
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397
sbdrag
sbdrag
Gryphon
Would like some thoughts on my prologue
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5
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582
Gryphon
Gryphon
The_best
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1
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292
tobascoasako
tobascoasako
OatMush
[Closed for now!<3]
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6
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534
KersenBloemNL
KersenBloemNL
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