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Feedback for chapter 1
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Adonalsium-Will-Remember-Ou
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Coldwarrior12
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Why are full-on lesbian harem novels so rare?
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Arkus86
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Siegburn
Announcement for the release of my new otome novel!
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Siegburn
Siegburn
S.TrujilloL.
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"We didn’t lose the war. We lost the ability to choose.” — Need feedback on emotional sci-fi prologue about AI and surrender
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S.TrujilloL.
S.TrujilloL.
Cookiez_N_Potionz
Story and Synopsis Feedback
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Cookiez_N_Potionz
Cookiez_N_Potionz
GeppettoNoir
Looking for Chapter-01 feedback o/
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CharlesEBrown
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kIlLaR_bEh
Looking for feedback. ChatGPT been hella glazing so need someone to take me down a notch??will give detailed feedback for anyone that gives me any!!
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kIlLaR_bEh
kIlLaR_bEh
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Feed back for my chapter!
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BlikBlind
BlikBlind
Coldwarrior12
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My lesbian Harem MC levels up by banging girls. Should I be arrested or published?
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Coldwarrior12
Coldwarrior12
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Guys I don't know if I'm doing alright or doing badly at writing my story.
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DearDire
DearDire
A_veil_of_red_ink
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A_veil_of_red_ink
A_veil_of_red_ink
Blackbriar
Request For Feedback - ODNT
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CharlesEBrown
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Need feedback/review for my new fantasy novel!
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Humanistheart
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Never knew forum can be used! Feedback time!
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Yuzai_Rearu
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Check out this story about a scammer who gets tasked to hunt a vampire in which he doesn´t believe!
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PWilkes
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GreenLemonShark
Lots Of Views, But No Favorites, Where Am I Dropping The Ball?
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CharlesEBrown
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Could someone please tell me if I still overdescribe things and my dialogues feel unnatural?
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RepresentingWrath
RepresentingWrath
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Can you please check out my story and tell me what you think?
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Axiweave
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Help me Reader-wan Kenobi! You're my only hope.
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Roney
Roney
Roney
Can I get some real feedback?
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Roney
Roney
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