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goldenphonix
New here. I need your opinion on my new book. I'm open to advice and suggestions
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Pessimystic
Posted my first story - if you like classic D&D party style fantasy with a bit of progression, please check it out!
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CharlesEBrown
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robbins117
Character Feedback - Read chapter 7
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91
robbins117
robbins117
robbins117
I will try a different approach. My story is terrible and requires much criticism and open mocking.
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229
robbins117
robbins117
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New member
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139
Angryange
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LeslieCrow
Posted my first story to SH—would love honest feedback on the blurb + tone
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198
LeslieCrow
LeslieCrow
A_the_king_of_all
My current concept draft for the 2nd chapter can anyone tell me if its good or not (feel free to roast me)
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A_the_king_of_all
A_the_king_of_all
Shanikumar
DARKER OBSESSION chap.7 has been released please do give your honest feedback on this novel chapter whether it's harsh or uplifting ?
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Shanikumar
Shanikumar
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First novel, would like some feedback on what I should improve.
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342
CharlesEBrown
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AIside
Converted my novel to webnov format. Am I going in the right direction?
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235
Cananga
Cananga
Madkins
Adult dark comedy feedback
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324
HisDivineShadow
HisDivineShadow
PinkLemon
I need some help with my novel. I wrote the first chapter several months ago, but the more I read it, the less comfortable I felt about it.
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369
PinkLemon
PinkLemon
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Can I get some feedback on my story thus far?
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91
Borqsaud
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LeilaniOtter
My first "video game" story commission. Be honest *^^*
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191
LeilaniOtter
LeilaniOtter
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First time writing. Please try it out and leave a review
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3
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213
AQ
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ZannaYO
Feedback Swap?
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HouseDelarouxScribbles
HouseDelarouxScribbles
Cookiez_N_Potionz
30 chapters up for my story: The Maverick and The Succubus
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0
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118
Cookiez_N_Potionz
Cookiez_N_Potionz
A_the_king_of_all
Can someone give me some feedback on my novels
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0
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94
A_the_king_of_all
A_the_king_of_all
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Feedback: Need readers to read and review my stories
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skyfleet12z
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PrimeCo35
I'm new to this place. I'm looking for readers!
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435
PrimeCo35
PrimeCo35
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