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LostinMovement
First time writing an Isekai LitRPG, looking for some feedback.
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4
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1K
LostinMovement
LostinMovement
Yorth
Are My First Few Chapters Readable
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2
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388
Yiphen
Yiphen
C
Feedback for Lilly: Story of a Girl
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8
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834
Moctemma
Moctemma
Farnott
Format feedback for no evil
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2
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548
Farnott
Farnott
Osamaru
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[Story Concept] Legend of the Parasite King (Prologue: Enough Meat to build a Bicycle!)
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1
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357
Nixil
Nixil
Nakama_the_witnesser
Review request - Virtual Judgement (action, adventure, drama)
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1
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335
Nixil
Nixil
R
Review Request: Ascendant Legacy
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3
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468
RestitutorOrbisWrites
R
Sacred_Night
Thoughts on Werewolf Litrpg
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4
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884
Ral
Ral
Love4NovelGuy
Battlefield Restart 3- An Ascendance Beyond Destiny
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0
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292
Love4NovelGuy
Love4NovelGuy
Sandycat135
Is my prologue attention grabbing enough?
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4
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634
Sandycat135
Sandycat135
N
Review Request: Son of the Spirit Beast
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0
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326
NagatoSaitou
N
clover2218
Opinions On The Prologue...
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4
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623
clover2218
clover2218
tale_gunner
The fine balance between plot and sex
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12
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2K
Assurbanipal_II
Assurbanipal_II
Love4NovelGuy
Review Request- Battlefield Restart
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8
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929
Love4NovelGuy
Love4NovelGuy
Mihou
Thoughts and Plot Suggestions for my second novel.
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7
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791
Sloth-of-Bangkok
Sloth-of-Bangkok
Nole786
What do you think???
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4
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755
blazjindanblue
blazjindanblue
D
AM I ACTUALLY A BAD WRITER?
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17
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2K
ChronicleCrawler
ChronicleCrawler
ChronicleCrawler
Feedback for my Novel - The Last Dukes' Memoirs
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0
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275
ChronicleCrawler
ChronicleCrawler
DalangTala
Need feedback (Open for feedback exchange)
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0
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287
DalangTala
DalangTala
M
New Story Feedback
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0
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285
Matt1plus
M
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