Writing Would love to have someone give me any kind of feedback or tips. Light smut so far. 18+

[JakMarandDax]

Hi, I'm pretty new to the site and have a story up that has no reviews. I'd love to get some feedback on it. Thank you in advance!

No Emotions Attached

Mae, a 23-year-old, goes looking for a sugar daddy after getting kicked out of the house. She quickly falls in love with him, but after her dad comes to her needing help with his debt, she finds herself working for a loan shark whom she also starts having feelings towards.

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[NotYourTypicalMan]

go for FULL SMUT AHEAD, that would boost readership and views.

Either Fluff or Smut , in between is not acceptable.

 

[Temple]

Flut or Smuff?

 

[JakMarandDax]

I guess I'm going to go full on smut!

 

[2021]

yes, yes, ye!!!!!!!!
smut is the way to go