ChickenIsTheBest
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So, I've recently started writing a story: My Wife Gifted Me An SSS-Rank Farming Talent | Scribble Hub
and I've noticed that it seems like my growth stagnated a bit. I know it's been less than a week, but i rather not keep up the trend of losing views. I fear I've been moving the plot too slowly to focus on the few characters introduced so far. I haven't even gotten to the system reveal that's...kind of the main point of the whole story. MC will get the talent in chapters 10-11, but i didn't want it to happen early because I wanted him to earn it by building his relationship with the FL.
So far, i've written less than 10k words and I would really appreciate harsh criticism. Okay well not too harsh because my feelings are fragile, but I definitely need to know if I'm progressing too slowly, if the chapters are engaging, etc.
Thanks to anyone who wants to help!
P.S I should probably mention that chapters 4 and 5 are R18. If you don't feel comfortable reading, just skip those chapters. It's not like they add much to the story anyways.
and I've noticed that it seems like my growth stagnated a bit. I know it's been less than a week, but i rather not keep up the trend of losing views. I fear I've been moving the plot too slowly to focus on the few characters introduced so far. I haven't even gotten to the system reveal that's...kind of the main point of the whole story. MC will get the talent in chapters 10-11, but i didn't want it to happen early because I wanted him to earn it by building his relationship with the FL.
So far, i've written less than 10k words and I would really appreciate harsh criticism. Okay well not too harsh because my feelings are fragile, but I definitely need to know if I'm progressing too slowly, if the chapters are engaging, etc.
Thanks to anyone who wants to help!
P.S I should probably mention that chapters 4 and 5 are R18. If you don't feel comfortable reading, just skip those chapters. It's not like they add much to the story anyways.
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