Would anyone care for an action adventure folk tale?

[lambenttyto]

Yes, I wrote one, and it reads like a folk tale, not like your average piece of fiction here. More specifically, it reads like a story from oral tradition, like something out of the One Thousand and One Arabian Nights. The length of this story is about thirty pages, but because of the writing style, it actually condenses quite a lot of story, so it may feel like a novel's worth in some respects. I would very much like reader feedback on this story.

Here it is: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/518195/the-epic-sword-amp-sorcery-entertainments-of-ashahnai/

 

[Macha]

I'd read it carefully.

 

[lambenttyto]

I'd read it carefully.

I definitely would not call it an "easy read."

 

[Deleted member 57675]

Nice.