BearlyAlive
I'm not savage, you're just average
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What are your reasons to turn your story into an Isekai story? Why did you drop Mary Sue, Gary Stue and Larry the Cat in front of a truck? Where there no other ways for those characters to exist? Did you really have to rip them out of their universe and create a power fantasy just for them?
Were there no other, most often even more interesting ways for your characters to get their powers and perspectives? What does prevent you from creating the exactly same character but giving them a background and backstory that explains their behaviour outside of "Me. Earthling."?
As an example, let's just take some random isekai and change the main character into a resident of that world (we're ignoring Slime, Spider, Log Horizon and Overlord for that since it's an actual plot point in those) and then think about how it changes the story:
Most isekai start with the MC either droping into existence or taking over the body of some random (almost always dying) kid effectively ending their life. They then get some BS power from some divine being that then ignores them for the rest of their life or sucks their pleasure center for no reason. MC then gets a harem of one-dimensional trohphies, rises to pseudo-nobility and fights eldritch abominations that can end everything but MC for even more human trophies and some food of their old world. At the end they either stay isekaid or take all their 151 trophies home.
And now we change the formula so much people won't even notice the original story anymore:
MC gets some BS power from some divine being that then ignores them for the rest of their life or sucks their pleasure center for no reason. MC then gets a harem of one-dimensional trohphies, rises to pseudo-nobility and fights eldritch abominations that can end everything but MC for even more human trophies and some strange food. At the end they either stay or take all their 151 trophies home.
See how much the story changed? In no way would people recognize the story anymore. It changed way too much. The characters act totally different now, too! We need this story to be isekai so it all makes sense!!!!!!
But there's also no way to give a character a "modern" perspective! Outcasting them, effectively cutting them out of society, so that they can regain their place in it as a blank state doesn't work and makes the character uninteresting!!! Having them finde knowledge that nobody else has would never work if we don't isekai them as there'd never be a chance to stumble upon some divine being or lost knowledge!!!
But food!!! Nobody would create the boring earth food now that we're in a different world, so how can we fit in a "quest for X food" arc that nobody ever likes?!
So yeah, what reason(s) did you have to write your isekai? Mine are the 5th and 6th. I wanna explain my rules ASAP so readers shut up and I can write without explaining shit anymore and I always liked portal fantasies where multiple worlds influenced each other.
Were there no other, most often even more interesting ways for your characters to get their powers and perspectives? What does prevent you from creating the exactly same character but giving them a background and backstory that explains their behaviour outside of "Me. Earthling."?
As an example, let's just take some random isekai and change the main character into a resident of that world (we're ignoring Slime, Spider, Log Horizon and Overlord for that since it's an actual plot point in those) and then think about how it changes the story:
Most isekai start with the MC either droping into existence or taking over the body of some random (almost always dying) kid effectively ending their life. They then get some BS power from some divine being that then ignores them for the rest of their life or sucks their pleasure center for no reason. MC then gets a harem of one-dimensional trohphies, rises to pseudo-nobility and fights eldritch abominations that can end everything but MC for even more human trophies and some food of their old world. At the end they either stay isekaid or take all their 151 trophies home.
And now we change the formula so much people won't even notice the original story anymore:
MC gets some BS power from some divine being that then ignores them for the rest of their life or sucks their pleasure center for no reason. MC then gets a harem of one-dimensional trohphies, rises to pseudo-nobility and fights eldritch abominations that can end everything but MC for even more human trophies and some strange food. At the end they either stay or take all their 151 trophies home.
See how much the story changed? In no way would people recognize the story anymore. It changed way too much. The characters act totally different now, too! We need this story to be isekai so it all makes sense!!!!!!
But there's also no way to give a character a "modern" perspective! Outcasting them, effectively cutting them out of society, so that they can regain their place in it as a blank state doesn't work and makes the character uninteresting!!! Having them finde knowledge that nobody else has would never work if we don't isekai them as there'd never be a chance to stumble upon some divine being or lost knowledge!!!
But food!!! Nobody would create the boring earth food now that we're in a different world, so how can we fit in a "quest for X food" arc that nobody ever likes?!
So yeah, what reason(s) did you have to write your isekai? Mine are the 5th and 6th. I wanna explain my rules ASAP so readers shut up and I can write without explaining shit anymore and I always liked portal fantasies where multiple worlds influenced each other.