Who wants to review my stories? Short but plan to make more.

[Slaynoir]

I'm starting to get back into the writing habit, it just takes me time to write a chapter that I like. I tend to be harsh on how I write so sometimes I'm not fairly sure if it's good or bad or what have you. Right now I've not much written but like I said, I'm working on it. Your feedback would be greatly appreciated! :D Here's my profile on the writing side of this site, for your convenience.

https://www.scribblehub.com/profile/61047/slaynoir/

You can pick any of them and say what you'd like, I'm pretty good at taking crits. Thanks!

 

[EternalSunset0]

Just commented directly on the one that caught my attention. Hope you'll keep writing more~

 

[Slaynoir]

Just commented directly on the one that caught my attention. Hope you'll keep writing more~

Tbh I don't know a lot of trendy shows (I know the name but not that I've really watched them -fail-) so I've not the slighest clue about what you're talking about when in comparison of my characters, but I'll be sure to look them up. I tend to watch a lot of quirky obscure shows so this is kinda new territory as I'm trying to be a bit more geared to trends lol The title was funny enough for me to write, but it was pretty fun to write as it is. Thanks a lot! I'll take what you said into consideration. I'm use to writing in paragraphs btw so my bad ^^;

 

[EternalSunset0]

What I meant are characters like these. Your girl reminded me of them. At least having the same vibes.

 

[Slaynoir]

What I meant are characters like these. Your girl reminded me of them. At least having the same vibes.

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Oh I see alright. She's not exactly a fairy-guide per-say but alright! Thanks! :D As I write more you'll see her character develop so don't fret! There will be more coming soon. Thank you for the insights.

What I meant are characters like these. Your girl reminded me of them. At least having the same vibes.

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btw put up a new chapter if you'd like to see it