Very misleading title? Should I change it? (Question resolved: Though I would like if some of you guys could comment feedback about it.)

LifeContinuesOn

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So I made a story based on this repeating dream I get, and I called is Summer Camp can people check it out and let me know if the title is too misleading, it's in a short journal diary format, like a person reporting interesting events they went through in this dangerous camp.
(Edit:) Thanks to everyone's support I have decided not to change it, majorly because I don't know what I would change it too.
 
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Valmond

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So I made a story based on this repeating dream I get, and I called is Summer Camp can people check it out and let me know if the title is too misleading, it's in a short journal diary format, like a person reporting interesting events they went through in this dangerous camp.
It’s fine. I did a triple misleading in one. Which is also not misleading. Waiting on the result for laughs on that. Anyway, it should be fine. A short title is much easier on the eyes. As well as, it serves the purpose of your story. Though, it may give the wrong idea at first glance. At this point, it is up to you to decide if it needs a different one or not. Since technically, it works.
 

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i dont see how the title would be misleading. it's a summer camp, right? just not a usual one from the synopsis says
 
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