Ultimate Goal: Completing My First Book (Need Feedback!)

Should I weave some romance/harem themes into this story?

  • Yes - Ultimate Harem for the Bisexual Character!

    Votes: 1 20.0%
  • Yes - for meaningful romance with limited partners

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • No - Maybe a little tiny bit, but focus on the monster hunting

    Votes: 4 80.0%
  • No - Fuck Love. Level those hunters all the way!

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    5

RedRIcecake

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Monster Hunter System
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This story is inspired by Solo Leveling and The S-Classes I Raise

It follows the protagonist, Noah Vallance, an F-rank Hunter who witnessed the end of the world being broadcasted on national television in the year 2026. His unique skills that remained blank all this time had finally activated, sending him back 10 years ago to the day before 4th of July 2016. Equipped with the memories of the previous timeline, he has the chance to save his family and prevent the future calamity from happening.

In addition, he has been given the [Monster Hunter System], a gaming module for him to collect hunters and promote them into S-Ranks.

--End synopsis

Hello!

This only has two chapters and I'm currently writing the third chapter. However, this story has been 3 months in the planning stages, and I just recently started writing it with no plans on how the middle and the ending would look like. I have decided to do it chapter by chapter, because this is how I write. A chaotic person with no events planned @.@. So feedback would helpful.

One more thing, it's not noted in the book yet, but Noah Vallance is bisexual. I don't want this information to stand out too much, but there will be romantic interactions between him and both genders, which is why I've setup this poll in order to get your opinions...

Should this story have a bit of romance woven into it? Or ridiculous harem building just for the readers service? @.@ Personally, I dislike both harem and reverse-harem, but I secretly like it if both genders fall in love with the MC, regardless of their gender. And it's not polyamorous, since the love interests don't like each other, only the MC.

So what do you think? If the vote is not enough, please leave a comment below. I'd love to hear your opinion.
 

proxybaba

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then for romance plot, go the same as Solo levelling, adding girls to the plot is really scamming people who came here to enjoy an OP character journey.
ps - my opinion does not mean everyone thinks the same
 
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