Trying something new with a story

Cookiez_N_Potionz

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Hello, SH!

It's been awhile since I've been on because I was working on different novel projects and crusading through life.

Hope everyone is doing well?

So, I only have 4 chapters up and it's in a genre I like a lot which is Supernatural/Mystery. But I'm also combining these with the LitRPG tag. Just wanted to know what you think so far? You can stop early if ya want


 
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NineHeadHeavenDevouringSerpent

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What's with highlighted words every now and then? Am i supposed to note them down as keywords for the mid terms? It's breaking the immersion.

Other than that seems like a decent first chapter, keep writing ??
 

Cookiez_N_Potionz

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What's with highlighted words every now and then? Am i supposed to note them down as keywords for the mid terms? It's breaking the immersion.

Other than that seems like a decent first chapter, keep writing ??


Sorry about that, I wanted some words to stand out. Does that mess up the story?

Thx again for reading!
 
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