The Mad King of the Treemen - Now Illustrated (Come See a few pictures!)

[Jayrayme6]

Hello Everybody, I've decided to continue posting my novel the Mad King of the Treemen.

I even added a few pictures.

I'm looking for people's feedback about the new pictures in the context of the story.

Does it increase your enjoyment of the story?

CLICK HERE TO READ STORY'S BLURB

CLICK HERE TO READ THE STORY AND
FIND ABOUT WHAT THEY ARE ABOUT.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Yes, the pictures are awesome!

 

[Deleted member 58005]

The bird looks fucking fantastic holy hell

 

[Aaqil]

Very nice,

 

[Lloyd]

You use passive language in the very first paragraph. DROPPED!

 

[Jayrayme6]

The bird looks fucking fantastic holy hell

Thanks, Man. I will keep posting story-related pictures in the forums. :)

You use passive language in the very first paragraph. DROPPED!

You use passive language in the very first paragraph. DROPPED!

Thanks man :) You can tell me any suggestions in private. I fixed the first sentence.

 

[Kassel]

Hello Everybody, I've decided to continue posting my novel the Mad King of the Treemen.

I even added a few pictures.

I'm looking for people's feedback about the new pictures in the context of the story.

Does it increase your enjoyment of the story?

CLICK HERE TO READ STORY'S BLURB

CLICK HERE TO READ THE STORY AND
FIND ABOUT WHAT THEY ARE ABOUT.

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The first picture reminds me of berserk nya. Very similar art style.