Review Swap Please!

[Iwriteforfun]

The thing is simple, just leave a review on my work, a honest one, I don't mind criticism. And I do the same.
My engagement is dimming a bit, so wanted to give it a boost, so anyone up for one?
Just post a link to your story in the comments, and I'll read as much as I can, so please do the same!

 

[WinterTimeCrime]

I was gonna do it because you asked nicely, but your profile is disabled.

 

[Iwriteforfun]

I was gonna do it because you asked nicely, but your profile is disabled.

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Oops, here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1222880/the-endless-ascent/

 

[WinterTimeCrime]

Oops, here's the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1222880/the-endless-ascent/

Wrote a review. And hey, it's your first novel, so I will cut you some slack. However, I'd say this isn't a book that's going to get much attention because of the recycled premise and shoddy MC.

I've been in your shoes; my first and second novels stunk, too. Just keep writing, find a good stopping point, learn from established writers, and improve on your characterization and world-building to make something unique (or at least your character, if you plan to continue in the progression department).

You should post your book on the review threads for multiple opinions. Good luck ?