Please help me become a better writer

[RodentCowboy]

I just started again and I want review what I could do better the title is saldor

 

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[RodentCowboy]

Saldor

Solnen is a nephalem; a being who is half angel half demon. Follow him has he tries to escape to a realm where no one can follow him... hopefully Disclaimer: cover pic isn't mine this is link https://www.google.com/search?q=halo+with+horns&rlz=1CAUIGY_enUS966&tbm=...

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[RepresentingCaution]

What is the best writing advice you’ve ever come across and take it to heart?

But 95% of writing ist just hard work. Learning the rules, learning story structure and tropes, writing as blue collar job without any artsy creativity. bull-fucking-shit. only 25% of it is really hard work. the rest of them consist of 60% failure, 10% actually learning how to write, 3%...

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