Newbie asking for review

[JohnHKnight]

Hey everyone!

I just started to post my story here yesterday and I'd really love some feedback, review, or even just readers. But mostly reviews, I mean, one can only learn from criticism, right?
Montgomery and Carano is an urban fantasy love story/action/crime novel/drama/horror/comedy loosely based on Romeo and Juliet, taking place in London, nowadays. Magic is real, vampires walks the streets, self-proclaimed superheroes jumping roof to roof, and public transport sucks (certain things never change).

Here is a link, if you could check out and give some advice/thoughts/feedback, that would be great!

Montgomery and Carano

A modern take on Romeo and Juliet. Jenna Carano is a badass demon hunter, hot headed and passionate, while Professor Robert Montgomery is the exact opposite: always calm and disciplined. They were raised to hate each other but when someone much worse than they are gets loose on the streets...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Most of the readers here are silent. I recommend writing.com for getting feedback since they have a cool gift point system where you can earn points by giving reviews and then use those points to request reviews.

 

[JohnHKnight]

That's an interesting idea but wouldn't be a simple review swap easier then? Or is that not something people encourage on this site?

 

[UYScuti]

That's an interesting idea but wouldn't be a simple review swap easier then? Or is that not something people encourage on this site?

I don't think reviews here carry as much weight as other sites, and readers are quiet overall. You just need to post. If readers like your story, they'll follow. Leave author notes at the bottom of your chapters. Maybe someone will respond.

 

[JohnHKnight]

Maybe not but I'd still like to know what people are thinking about my story. I will try the author note thing though, that's a good idea.

 

[JohnHKnight]

Just so the thread will jump up to the top: I'm still hoping for some feedback, review, even just comments on my story, Montgomery and Carano (link above). Please take a look if you have the time!