New story premise (looking for feedback)

Comatoast

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Stop, Collaborate and listen, Ice is back with a brand new addition.

So here's the idea.

Some guy is painfully normal, Like he never did anything challenging, Never got pushed to do sports, Never pursued a talent, Never followed his passions...

But then the world is ending. Humanity got hit with a double whammy, A plague and a Disastrous cosmic entity that is now eating earth and the government is looking for people unaffected by the Plague to join the bomb squad to go on a sewerslide mission and sacrifice themselves to reach the monster's heart.

The normal guy sees this as a way to afford the medicine to cure his wife's disease and save his son so he does his first ever hard thing.

And That's what they do.
All five members brave into the beast but die off one by one until its just the normal guy who makes it to the beast.

Then he dies.

With his final breath he makes a wish, That man wishes for a second chance.

That's where the story begins, The story is a goofy horror/action with psychological commentary revolving around an incredibly normal man defying what he was 'meant to be' to do incredibly extraordinary things.

His soul is hopping through different realms learning life lessons and how to be someone while doing ridiculous feats like challenging death to a foot race or out riddling a sphinx.

Tell me what you think! It's just a bare bones premise but I'm sure it'll be fleshed out more if yall like it.
 

Comatoast

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I like progressive fics
This is quick transmigration or stimulation type of fic right?
It's similar to a Transmigtation, The main character will essentially have one place where they return to often for directions from a primordial entity *no spoilers* and will have gotten strong enough to do something that seemed unthinkable before in hopes to ultimately cross the gap between the dead and the living known as the Spirit Gorge and defeat the Divines attempting to hold him back and keep the natural order.
 

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Sound a bit like godslap by moist crit1kal, with the metero thing. Might gave it a read.
 
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