Need a feedback on my little story.

[Liam07N09]

What?! I Bring Dungeon To The Cultivation World?!

'Man, I just wanted to be a quiet little spiritual puppeteer and a low level spiritual planter… not the boss of a damn dungeon!” Liam Adhart woke up in a ruthless cultivation world with a single goal: stay out of trouble, build puppets to protect himself, and live under the...

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Any feedback if possible. Just a generic story, on what I could improve. I sucks at timeskip.