My first novel please help me this became good (thats in french but u Can use Google trad

[IsseiVeskitos]

- (Volume 1) Chapter 1 : Devour | Scribble Hub

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[Ilikewaterkusa]

I Ate The World - Chapitre 1 : .. | Scribble Hub

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You aren't supposed to have it in french. English only lol

 

[J_Chemist]

what

 

[IsseiVeskitos]

That in english now
Sorry ???

 

[DarkeReises]

wut

 

[Tsuru]

Biggest advice of them to novel authors : Read and some more (novels of others)

Chinese webnovels : seriousness
JP : craziness
KR : Dramatic
Go read "Luckiest man" chinese web novel. It was a very famous chinese webnovel because it incorporated both jp comedy and some seriousness of chineses. Sole reason it's rare to get this kind of combo style is because chineses hate japaneses because of the previous war and indoctrination. Luckily not all people are like that and just like the fact that animes became accepted now with any youngsters unlike 10 years ago, now more and more chinese people accept animes.

 

[IsseiVeskitos]

Okay

 

[1moreindakitchen]

I’ve been reading a web novels called "Sous le ciel noir" for 12 years now. The last part was download today I think I’m addicted to this novel to escape the harsh reality.

I instantly thought of Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint ... ?

Did you translate your story yourself? What tools did you use?
Well, you should at least straighten out some of the typos.
Getting readers for your translated stories might not be easy. I know this myself. Still, good luck with yours.

 

[Zirrboy]

The chapters could use a bit more detail, especially in the parts that shouldn't be fast paced fights.