CallistoReign
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I’m looking for reader impressions on my story Second/Frame.
It’s an ultra slow-burn long-form MM romance with slice-of-life elements, set across a fictional football season. I try to let the scenes carry the story through action beats, dialogue, and character tension, with the games woven in as part of the emotional and seasonal progression.
What I’d really like to know is how people are feeling about it so far:
If you’ve read some of it or are currently reading, I’d really love to hear your thoughts.
Thank you so much!
It’s an ultra slow-burn long-form MM romance with slice-of-life elements, set across a fictional football season. I try to let the scenes carry the story through action beats, dialogue, and character tension, with the games woven in as part of the emotional and seasonal progression.
What I’d really like to know is how people are feeling about it so far:
- How do you feel about the characters?
- How is the relationship landing for you?
- Whether the slow burn is working emotionally?
- How the game/season beats are feeling alongside the romance?
- The NSFW aspect of the story
If you’ve read some of it or are currently reading, I’d really love to hear your thoughts.
Thank you so much!
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