Looking for feedback: Shark girl romance, horny agents, and government panic. Too weird or just enough?

[serecal123]

Hey all,


I’ve been serializing my sci-fi comedy She Came From Below here on SH, and I’d love some feedback from anyone who likes:

• Girls with fins, feathers, tentacles, and attitude
• A confused college guy trying not to fall in love during a government manhunt
• A sexy agent with a clipboard and no soul
• A Prime Minister who’s a twerking kangaroo pop star
• A dead-serious conspiracy that spirals into horny chaos

It’s absurd, fast-paced, semi-romantic, fully unhinged, and I’m almost done posting the whole thing.


My question: Is this too weird for Scribble Hub, or is this exactly what some of you are craving and just haven’t found yet?


Here's the story:
She Came From Below


Sample quote:

“Dude, that guy’s trying to towel off a sea monster with boobs!”

I’d genuinely love reactions. Good, bad, roastable. If it’s not clicking, I want to know why. If it is your kind of chaos, say hi so I know you exist.