Sapphirale
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I'm a new writer and just started my first web novel here on SH. It's a xianxia story with a male-to-female angle, reincarnation, and cultivation elements. Right now there are only 5 chapters up, so it's still very early on.
Since I'm just starting out, I'd really appreciate any feedback — whether it's on pacing, character depth, worldbuilding, or just general impressions. I'm trying to improve and figure out what works (and what doesn't), so please don’t hold back.
Here is the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1642277/the-beauty-who-defied-destiny/
Since I'm just starting out, I'd really appreciate any feedback — whether it's on pacing, character depth, worldbuilding, or just general impressions. I'm trying to improve and figure out what works (and what doesn't), so please don’t hold back.
Here is the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1642277/the-beauty-who-defied-destiny/