lydiawinehouse
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Hi everyone!
I’m currently working on two novels and would love some feedback or honest reviews to help improve my writing. I welcome critique, suggestions, or just your general impressions if you’ve read it—even a short comment means a lot!
Both stories fall under fantasy, but they carry very different tones:
? I Fall in Love with a Cupid
A romance-fantasy following a girl whose world is flipped upside down when she crosses paths with a mysterious Cupid—someone not quite human, carrying burdens of his own. It’s about fate, longing, and what it really means to love someone who might not stay.
? Lunacy of a Forsaken Child
A darker, myth-inspired fantasy set in a brutal kingdom where nobles compete for the throne through bloodshed. The story dives into ancient Ibanese traditions, betrayal, and the slow unraveling of sanity in a world haunted by spirits and twisted legacies.
Feel free to read either one—or both—and let me know your thoughts.
Scribble Hub Username: [lydiawinehouse]
Thanks in advance to anyone who checks them out! ?
I’m currently working on two novels and would love some feedback or honest reviews to help improve my writing. I welcome critique, suggestions, or just your general impressions if you’ve read it—even a short comment means a lot!
Both stories fall under fantasy, but they carry very different tones:
? I Fall in Love with a Cupid
A romance-fantasy following a girl whose world is flipped upside down when she crosses paths with a mysterious Cupid—someone not quite human, carrying burdens of his own. It’s about fate, longing, and what it really means to love someone who might not stay.
? Lunacy of a Forsaken Child
A darker, myth-inspired fantasy set in a brutal kingdom where nobles compete for the throne through bloodshed. The story dives into ancient Ibanese traditions, betrayal, and the slow unraveling of sanity in a world haunted by spirits and twisted legacies.
Feel free to read either one—or both—and let me know your thoughts.
Scribble Hub Username: [lydiawinehouse]
Thanks in advance to anyone who checks them out! ?
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