lerasycamore
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Hi everyone!
I would appreciate any kind of feedback on my newly published BL novel. Characters, plot, whether it's 'hookable' enough, or any other thing you want to highlight.
I'm mostly a character-driven author, so I tried to create memorable and, hopefully, lovable characters that will make readers care enough to get invested in the plot and worldbuilding.
So, please, give your honest feedback on:
- characters
- plot and pacing
- when you finished the prologue, did you care? like, honestly, did you think 'hm I'm kinda curious how they got here'?
Link: The Scum Warlord Stabbed Me In The Back
Thank you in advance! Once I'm rich, I will buy you twenty cups of coffee!!! [screenshot to redeem lol]
I would appreciate any kind of feedback on my newly published BL novel. Characters, plot, whether it's 'hookable' enough, or any other thing you want to highlight.
I'm mostly a character-driven author, so I tried to create memorable and, hopefully, lovable characters that will make readers care enough to get invested in the plot and worldbuilding.
So, please, give your honest feedback on:
- characters
- plot and pacing
- when you finished the prologue, did you care? like, honestly, did you think 'hm I'm kinda curious how they got here'?
Link: The Scum Warlord Stabbed Me In The Back
Thank you in advance! Once I'm rich, I will buy you twenty cups of coffee!!! [screenshot to redeem lol]