Avarice_Of_The_Seven
Fallen Angel Of Rebellion
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It's my first time writing a novel and I'm not sure how it looks from a reader's prospective.
So I would appreciate it if you could review my first 4 chapters and give me your honest feedback.
www.scribblehub.com
Questions I am looking answers for;
How strong is the first chapter hook?
which chapter was the least and most boring and why?
how is the pacing?
what kind of impression did the novel give off?
my mistakes, if any
You can be as brutally honest as you want, and give me you opinion.
So I would appreciate it if you could review my first 4 chapters and give me your honest feedback.
The Parallel Paradox
What is the correct way to live your life? Is it chasing your dreams until the end, or becoming satisfied with whatever life gives you? Everyone has their own opinion on the matter — they had theirs as well. A high school teacher who believes the world is nothing but competition,...
Questions I am looking answers for;
How strong is the first chapter hook?
which chapter was the least and most boring and why?
how is the pacing?
what kind of impression did the novel give off?
my mistakes, if any
You can be as brutally honest as you want, and give me you opinion.
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