Looking for feedback and critique on my first novel "The Parallel Paradox"

Avarice_Of_The_Seven

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It's my first time writing a novel and I'm not sure how it looks from a reader's prospective.
So I would appreciate it if you could review my first 4 chapters and give me your honest feedback.


Questions I am looking answers for;

How strong is the first chapter hook?

which chapter was the least and most boring and why?

how is the pacing?

what kind of impression did the novel give off?

my mistakes, if any


You can be as brutally honest as you want, and give me you opinion.
 
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