FallenQuill
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I just started publishing my novel, New Life As A Max-Level Archmage, and I’d really appreciate some honest feedback — especially on the pacing, tone, and how the early chapters land.
Summary:
Kairo Velen has died 999 times in brutal divine Trials. Each time, the world reset… and so did he.
But now? No more resets.
This is his final life.
Armed with the power, memories, and scars of every death, Kairo doesn’t plan to survive this time — he plans to win.
If you’re into progression fantasy, serious tone, and characters carrying quiet rage and battle scars, this might be your thing.
? Read it here on Scribble Hub
Whether it’s a quick impression or some deeper thoughts, I truly appreciate anyone who gives it a shot.
Thanks for reading
— FallenQuill
Summary:
Kairo Velen has died 999 times in brutal divine Trials. Each time, the world reset… and so did he.
But now? No more resets.
This is his final life.
Armed with the power, memories, and scars of every death, Kairo doesn’t plan to survive this time — he plans to win.
If you’re into progression fantasy, serious tone, and characters carrying quiet rage and battle scars, this might be your thing.
? Read it here on Scribble Hub
Whether it’s a quick impression or some deeper thoughts, I truly appreciate anyone who gives it a shot.
Thanks for reading
— FallenQuill
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