WhiteCookie
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So… I’m kind of nervous to share my very first fanfic with y’all because I know fanfics can attract a lot of criticism. But I’m a newbie writer, just trying to improve my storytelling and grammar before diving into an original work. That’s why I started with this fanfic, a little passion project to help me find my flow
So the title of the fanfic is "New Life New Saga" it’s about a guy who finds himself transported into the world of Summertime Saga—a game he used to play years ago. Now, he’s exploring this strangely familiar place, trying to figure out what’s real, what’s changed, and how he fits into it all.
I know the fanfic is based on an NSFW game, but even though the game had its...arousing moments, what really hooked me was the humor. The plot could get so exaggerated at times, and I found myself laughing a lot. The gameplay was fun too (and not just because of the erotic elements!). It may have been simple, but it was engaging and kept me entertained and It was one of those experiences that made me curious about the characters and their world.
That curiosity led me to wonder: what if I could take those characters and make them feel more human, with deeper emotions? What would happen if they made different choices, had different reactions, or faced more complex situations? The game’s tone is pretty spicy, so I thought, why not add a little sugar to sweeten it a bit to balance it out?
After brainstorming, tweaking chapters, and giving it some serious thought, I decided to share my fanfic with the world. I’m hoping you’ll give it a read and let me know how I did—whether it’s on the right track or if I’ve still got some work to do.
Here's the link if you guys want to read it:
New Life New Saga
So the title of the fanfic is "New Life New Saga" it’s about a guy who finds himself transported into the world of Summertime Saga—a game he used to play years ago. Now, he’s exploring this strangely familiar place, trying to figure out what’s real, what’s changed, and how he fits into it all.
I know the fanfic is based on an NSFW game, but even though the game had its...arousing moments, what really hooked me was the humor. The plot could get so exaggerated at times, and I found myself laughing a lot. The gameplay was fun too (and not just because of the erotic elements!). It may have been simple, but it was engaging and kept me entertained and It was one of those experiences that made me curious about the characters and their world.
That curiosity led me to wonder: what if I could take those characters and make them feel more human, with deeper emotions? What would happen if they made different choices, had different reactions, or faced more complex situations? The game’s tone is pretty spicy, so I thought, why not add a little sugar to sweeten it a bit to balance it out?
After brainstorming, tweaking chapters, and giving it some serious thought, I decided to share my fanfic with the world. I’m hoping you’ll give it a read and let me know how I did—whether it’s on the right track or if I’ve still got some work to do.
Here's the link if you guys want to read it:
New Life New Saga