Idea Feedback: The Goblin Is Reincarnated

[Arch9CivilReactor]

I have this bad memory where I can only remember something after it’s written down. For me, this is both creating an idea on the fly while trying to make the story decent and cohesive.

It is gonna be one of those dark/fantasy/ero novels so if that’s not your thing then stop here because things are about to get weird. The main premise of this draft idea is that a ‘goblin’, and not a human, is the one getting reincarnated.

Hmm… The backstory for him… It has to be…

—The main character is a goblin from Hell that is considered the lowest type of Demon and is classed as a ‘Breeding Unit’. Succubi create hordes of goblins for their armies, but only the ones with superior genetics get good treatment.

This specific goblin has intelligence unlike his fellow brethren, and physical potential that surpasses the average of his species. He is considered a great tool and precious asset that is allowed some level of freedom as a reward.

The goblin uses his little freedom to concoct an escape plan. He plans on using entering the reincarnation circle to escape his ultimate fate of dying as a tool, and barely succeeds thanks to the help of a succubus lover that cared for him.

He escapes into a world of magic and fantasy as a regular RPG fantasy style goblin, and his lover reincarnates as regular succubus that abides by different rules than from Hell. They end up corrupting heroes and saints together to survive.

Basically it’s Re:Monster if the MC didn’t have an absorption ability and was a goblin reincarnated as another goblin. His ‘cheat’ is that he is smarter than other goblins and can form connections with other tribes besides his own.

Succubus being with him early on is beneficial but is by no means ‘extremely powerful’, as she was an ordinary low-ranked succubus before her own reincarnation. Her abilities also don’t work on those with protections or mental fortitude.

This was a fun little idea I thought of doing since I had free time. Had not completely thought it out this far until I wrote it on here. Looking back, the idea seems decent enough. Gonna get started on it right now.

I’ll have a look on any feedback when I’m done.

 

[ConansWitchBaby]

Introduce mecha.

 

[TreasureHouse]

Well, if I were the breeder, I would be focusing on brute strength and keeping the intelligence to the bare minimum. The last thing I need is to deal with is any sort of uprising.

They just need to fuck and fight. They are the weakest type of demon. They are the feeder guppies/goldfish at the pet store. Cannon fodder.

If anything, I would cull this fellow goblin at a certain age before he get's too smart or influential.

Otherwise, Moses of the Goblins will eventually happen.

Just some food for thought about how and why he might get un-alive'd.

 

[Arch9CivilReactor]

Well, if I were the breeder, I would be focusing on brute strength and keeping the intelligence to the bare minimum. The last thing I need is to deal with is any sort of uprising.

They just need to fuck and fight. They are the weakest type of demon. They are the feeder guppies/goldfish at the pet store. Cannon fodder.

If anything, I would cull this fellow goblin at a certain age before he get's too smart or influential.

Otherwise, Moses of the Goblins will eventually happen.

Just some food for thought about how and why he might get un-alive'd.

Well… Succubi are usually known for ‘draining victims’ (vague), sex (straightforward), control abilities (vague) and charm (vague). I think they’d be fine having a bunch of mind-controlled goblins that are also vitality food, but I guess that depend on the ability specifics… right?

Though I guess one smart goblin escaping them is enough to show they don’t have foolproof methods. Plus it’s hard to know what ‘death’ is in Hell, which you go after death. Good thing I ejected him out of there as fast as possible.

Otherwise he’d just be dead.