DismaiNaim
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An orphaned peasant lives a frivolous life chasing girls around the village until he’s called to war, where the harsh realities of survival draw out his true nature. After hope, tragedy, love, mystery, and betrayal, the monster in the mirror faces a chance to reshape an empire.
Another Version:
Raised in the Imperial church but born of the Falcon Clan, Caleb has always lived between two faiths. When his conscription papers arrive, his path seems set—until he discovers where they're sending him.
Carthia. A name that makes faces go pale and voices drop to whispers. A place that steals sons and swallows them whole.
Some journeys change you. Others don't let you come back at all.
Attempted Revision:
A orphaned peasant raised in the imperial church had an idyllic life skipping chores, hunting in the mountains, and chasing girls around the village.
Until he's called to war.
He's never held a sword.
Try to escape, and spend life running from the Emperor's notorious Invisible Hand. Go, and face certain death in a faraway land unlike anything he's ever known.
An orphaned peasant lives a frivolous life chasing girls around the village until he’s called to war, where the harsh realities of survival draw out his true nature. After hope, tragedy, love, mystery, and betrayal, the monster in the mirror faces a chance to reshape an empire.
Another Version:
Raised in the Imperial church but born of the Falcon Clan, Caleb has always lived between two faiths. When his conscription papers arrive, his path seems set—until he discovers where they're sending him.
Carthia. A name that makes faces go pale and voices drop to whispers. A place that steals sons and swallows them whole.
Some journeys change you. Others don't let you come back at all.
Attempted Revision:
A orphaned peasant raised in the imperial church had an idyllic life skipping chores, hunting in the mountains, and chasing girls around the village.
Until he's called to war.
He's never held a sword.
Try to escape, and spend life running from the Emperor's notorious Invisible Hand. Go, and face certain death in a faraway land unlike anything he's ever known.