Hows my first chapter?

Puppetboi

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Alright newbie here this is just my attempt at a fantasy adventure story.

It's really just an adventure in a typical fantasy world with some of my own made up things or fantasy things I find interesting like a city of puppets or the khabalist who wanted to make a human from scratch.

Anyways heres the introduction it's really just meant to introduce the charectors and some ideas so I hope it's good enough.


Here ya go
 
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