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Felt something and wanted to convey it.
Either the reader understand or not but you.
Hide that emotion(show, don't tell) and let them make their own perception.
Make it impactful for yourself, no NSFW please.
Currently browsing wares in the market, everything filled with junks then it caught my eye. Within those thousands a handmade mini-sculpture of an extinct tree. "Where did you get it?" to the trader. "Ah yes.... a long time ago, those are the person who had tattered clothing as they had unkempt gray hair." *Nodded* "How much?" they put up two fingers "Pennies." *Paid* "Thank you..." In the den, I compared it to the drawing and it was enough for my heart was in woe.
Either the reader understand or not but you.
Hide that emotion(show, don't tell) and let them make their own perception.
Make it impactful for yourself, no NSFW please.
Currently browsing wares in the market, everything filled with junks then it caught my eye. Within those thousands a handmade mini-sculpture of an extinct tree. "Where did you get it?" to the trader. "Ah yes.... a long time ago, those are the person who had tattered clothing as they had unkempt gray hair." *Nodded* "How much?" they put up two fingers "Pennies." *Paid* "Thank you..." In the den, I compared it to the drawing and it was enough for my heart was in woe.
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