Hi Guys.

[Zephoxor]

I'm a new author. I hope that you can read my work "The Incredible System". I hope you can critique my work so that I can improve more. I hope you like it! Thanks!!!

 

[binarysoap]

You might want to put a link and describe what it's about.

 

[tiaf]

First: Hi, welcome to ScribbleHub forum!
Second: A link for lazy people would be nice!
Third: You got the section wroooong. We have a story feedback category