New_Leaf
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So I've been writing this series of mine for a month now and I've been stuck lately. IDK if the pace of the story has been shitty lately. If any of you are interested to read and give me feedback on what to improve I'm open to one. And I'd really appreciate it~
(This is the link to my series if u guys want to understand the flow and stuff or pace I'm talking about):
I'm The Pitiful Villain
(This link contains the advanced chapters which need review):
ADVANCED CHAPTERS
NOTE: Btw the link expires until 18
I'm also open to any ideas 18+ or some shit. Thank you for your guys time
(This is the link to my series if u guys want to understand the flow and stuff or pace I'm talking about):
I'm The Pitiful Villain
(This link contains the advanced chapters which need review):
ADVANCED CHAPTERS
NOTE: Btw the link expires until 18
I'm also open to any ideas 18+ or some shit. Thank you for your guys time