Kuroinamida91
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So I received a 1 star and worried I've written something unappealing. Well, I had a few good ratings and I'm just wanting to make sure it's not a writing issue and just a "don't like this" problem
Bear in mind this is my first light novel although I have written lots before. Also I'm a female writing from both perspectives, so I'm hoping I made the male lead have depth. Anyway, just looking for some constructive criticism. Thanks!
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Bear in mind this is my first light novel although I have written lots before. Also I'm a female writing from both perspectives, so I'm hoping I made the male lead have depth. Anyway, just looking for some constructive criticism. Thanks!
Dragon Ball XenoVerse 3: reincarnated as Broly’s Sister?
Author-chan: Currently Under Edit! (Edited chaps will be noted.) Edit on hold! Expect: lots of fighting, sexual tension, some fluff and jokes from the male main character. Eventual real world merge and future missions revolving new enemies and old foes, a tournament here and there, and a weak...